Okay, I want to preface this by saying that I feel like an appalling nerd for bringing this up, and so I do so with full awareness of what nit-picky bitchery this is going to come across as, and all the embarrassment that I deserve to feel while doing so.
THIS HAVING BEEN SAID
Trolls have yellowish-orange eyes while alive, and blank, pupil-free white eyes as ghosts. There's no point at which or state in which they have eyes as you've got her with above here.
It's otherwise quite charming work, and I'd love to see more of the same.
Lol, thank you for pointing that out, I will keep that in mind for when I draw more. I have yet to become familiar with the world of Homestuck. Pls don't feel bad about pointing that out to me, it's always helpful to receive good tips